Feedback and Revision: Pedagogical Approaches to Advance Student Writing

The teaching-focused research question I propose to study next quarter is, “What type of teacher feedback generates substantial student revision?” For this study, I will require revision for two assignments: the literacy narrative and the research proposal. The literacy narrative provides an opportunity to dive deeper into creative writing and work on storytelling elements. The […]

Reflective Annotated Bibliography on “A Grounded Theory Approach for Studying Writing and Literacy.”

Farkas, Kerrir R.H., and Christina Haas. “A Grounded Theory Approach for Studying Writing and Literacy.” Practicing Research in Writing Studies: Reflexive and Ethically Responsible Research, by Katrina M. Powell and Pamela Takayoshi, Hampton Press, 2012, pp. 81–95. Summary of the article: In this article, authors Kerrie R.H. Farkas and Christina Haas, provide an overview of what […]

How to Generate Substantial Student Revision: A Study on Effective Feedback (And Related Assignment/ Rubric Structures)

Teaching English 101 this quarter has ignited many questions for me regarding what pedagogical approaches advance student writing, specifically in the realm of feedback and revision. My motivation to understand best practices in regards to how to give effective feedback and how to assign and evaluate revision, is rooted both in wanting to provide students […]

Accountability: A Necessary Component for Both Students and Teachers in the Classroom

I don’t believe that the relationship between students and teachers is inherently negative, however the power dynamic between students and teachers cannot be denied. This power dynamic can lend itself to a somewhat adversarial relationship; students yielding to the demands of the teacher out of necessity can create natural feelings of contempt. In terms of […]

Feedback for Student C (On Their Response to Rose’s “Rigid Rules”)

Feedback: Dear Student C, Your essay response to Rose’s article was self-reflective and engaging. You successfully demonstrated what from the essay resonated with your own experience and process. Where you lost points in the rubric were in demonstrating an understanding of Rose’s primary message. For example, the first paragraph of your essay conflates the rules […]

Limited Glimpses

I would love to know more about and the scopes of these worldviews. I have had limited glimpses into my student’s worldviews. These have come from their literacy timelines and narratives and to some extent their research topics. In their literacy timelines, it was interesting to see what political events they mentioned during certain years. […]

Feminist Pedagogy

Jarratt, Susan C. “Feminist Pedagogy.” A Guide to Composition Pedagogies, Tate, Rupiper, Schick, Oxford University Press, 2001, pp. 113-131. Summary This essay traces key questions and insights in the field of Feminist Pedagogy. The author synthesizes multiple perspectives on a number of inter-related issues through the lens of gender including: language and genre; discourse in […]

“Questions of Intent: Communication Disorder, Transfer, and Writing Pedagogy.”

Vallis, Gina L. “Questions of Intent: Communication Disorder, Transfer, and Writing Pedagogy.” Pedagogy: Critical Approaches to Teaching Literature, Language, Composition, and Culture 15.3 (2015): 441-457. Web Summary This article examines communicative intent in the writing classroom through applying lessons from both personal reflections and studies of autism spectrum disorder (ASD). The author discusses problem-solving from a […]

Reflections on Limiting Feedback to Students and Normalizing Failure

The two additional chapters I read were: “When Responding to Student Writing, More is Better” by Muriel Harris and “Failure is Not An Option” by Allison D. Carr. The piece by Harris discusses the expectations surrounding extensive written comments in response to their writing and the conviction that students learn from these comments. Harris argues […]