Dear A— Thank you very much for your essay! It was a pleasure to read. We’ve talked throughout the quarter about the specific strengths found in your writing, such as your knack for writing a good introductory hook and your ability to transition between big ideas. Both of these strengths are very much present here. […]
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Apprehenzled Instructor
Feedback: Dear Student A, Your second paragraph is pure gold. I love how you set yourself up in contrast to those writers who love their craft and appear to be effortless in their production. At the end of that paragraph you give a succinct definition of “apprehenzled” and the emotional state that it entails. With […]